2009年6月2日 星期二

Take a One-day MRT's Trip in Taipei

One-day, my friend and me took MRT to went to Taipei Zoo. The pandas come from China was so cute. Left zoo, we went to Tamsui. The view is so beautiful, it's very unforgettable. And then we went to ShinLin. There are many people. The food was very delicious, but they are expensive. Leave the ShinLin, we took MRT to back home. Today we play very fun.
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  1. Jason's English Café2009年6月4日 晚上8:54

    1.One-day, my friend and me took MRT to went to Taipei Zoo.
    →One day, my friend and I took the MRT to the Taipei Zoo.
    2. The pandas come from China was so cute.
    → The pandas coming from China were so cute.
    3. Left zoo, we went to Tamsui. The view is so beautiful, it's very unforgettable.
    → Leaving the zoo, we went to Tamsui where the view was so beautiful and unforgettable.
    4. Leave the ShinLin, we took MRT to back home.
    → Leaving the Shinlin, we took the MRT home.
    5. Today we play very fun.
    → We had a lot of fun today.

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